Nick, you nailed this poem right on the head. Darkness is such an abyss! I'm with you there....but I don't think that's what's going to happen at 4 o'clock in the morning if you close your eyes. I think you may just fall asleep, lol. But this poem was sooo awsome!!! YOu should have gotten more comments and votes!! I'm shocked!!

~Sierra

hey yah it is ok i sometimes forget i leave windows open to :) anyways thanx for just telling me I loved your poem and the way it rymed very um classy lol well talk to you later
* ally *

lol it is ok sorry i shud have stayed anyways bye bye for now night
~ sweet dreams ~
ally

i hope u aite nick (flame boy) look i tried your email address and it told me it dosnt excist sorry i really want to talk to u i love ur poem

love cool girl lol

Cool. That was excellent and I loved the last part.

I really like the poem. thanx for the comment on mine- i didnt see it until today, nearly a week later, but its all good. Thanx though. This was a way good poem- 5/5

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