Not Rite

by The Flame Within   Mar 25, 2005


Admission is free so pay at the door
pull up a chair and sit on the floor
when bright day in the middle of the night
two dead boys got up to fight
they pulled out there knives and shot each other
a deaf policeman hear this noise
pulled out his gun and stabbed the two boys
if you do not believe my story is true
ask the blind me he saw it to

didn't write

sorry its wake its 4 am and I'm trying to stay awake lol

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  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    WOAH! How'd you change the sn? That's amazing!! Sweet sn.

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    I'm coming hold on.

  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    or did u not wanna come?

  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    go to

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    just copy and past it, you will see a lil bar that says name and password, the password is poem, put whatever you want in the names

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    not that I'm aware of.........any suggestions?