Interweaving Love

by Ð맆îñ¥   Mar 25, 2005


Twisting Around the curved dome of this world
An everlasting current that coiled and twirled
Our love is strange but not unwanted
As when together we are not haunted
We have our highs and our deep ravines
Corkscrews with fear and childish screams
Each time your kiss travels through time
An eddy encircles us, makes sure you’re mine
The spiral staircase is leading us astray
Love for each other each night we pray
Our whirlpool is drawing us closer again
The wind rips us aside, Lovers’ Bane
Forgive us for our quick descent
As least we believe the words that we meant

**Not sure if this is right in lasting love but well its love so it'll be alrite in this bit**

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  • 19 years ago

    by Bogie

    my bad, thats "ever" lasting
    not every lasting.

  • 19 years ago

    by Bogie

    Dang!!! Girl, this poem is every lasting love.
    The use of all the words that relate to circles
    make it so. Endless loops of love, excellent read.
    Write On

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent poem, really very well written

    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love.

    In Love Amit

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