OoooooooOoOOooOOooOo!! BRAVO!!!!! TERRIFICO!! GO GEORGI!! YEEHAWW!! lol, i love you lots my lil meatball hoagie. lol.

I saw the menu again and again and I almost peed my pants from laughing so hard at each time I saw Meatball Hoagie!! lol-I've never heard of it at our school, lol, I swear!! lol.

Georgi, Georgi, Georgi, Georgi, Georgi, Georgi, Georgi, Georgi, lol, that's pretty hard in my opinion!! lol-sry I was just hyper.

very good. wonderful poem

Over all, very good poem with an original idea behind it. I really liked it. I have one suggestion though. The first part of the poem is a bit awkward compared to the other parts. The flow isn't the same and the rhyming is a bit off. Maybe try working on that, but otherwise I enjoyed this poem and mostly because of it's originality. Very good job, you have a lot of talent.
SatuzKa

thanku for ur comment i will look into it! thanku! xxxx

I liked this poem, I'm sorry about your friend. Stay strong! The only critism that I have for this poem is that the "I's" need to be capitillized. Keep writing!

oh my..i liked this. my type of poem.. i diffrent types i write and this is one type..i liked..i liked... 5.. i got you in my favs too..ok?

aw reall sad and sweet! lovely really enjoyed it! please comment on my work if you have then time!
take care
xxxLoUxxx

i liked it a lot this one i actually liked every single bit of it beautifully written

wow, that was so sweet! i thought it was good.
p.s- please rate my poem 'Valentines Day'

aww, i love this poem so much it's sorta smalll but it's so nice

wow very moving......i loved it. Flowed really well.. keep it up"

take care

touching 5/5

Very nice. I'm not sure why this is rated so low, I thought it was very good. Thx for checking out my poem A Soldier's Mother.

that is an excellent poem really nice and so sad 5/5. thank you for your lovely commment thats really kind of you and much appreciated take care much luv jen x x x

Beautifully penned! Left a smile in my heart...keep it up~Holly