I totally agree with this poem, people don't see what's inside of us and they just asume that we are ok!!! Great poem, you have so much talent, I really love this one

And you can't stop the people;
That wish her to be dead.

I don't think that any one would really wish for you to be dead!!! Keep you head up, you are not alone, just remember that!!

Hugs Sabrina

Excellent infinity outta five Lol serisouly I loved it...Thanks for all the comments!!!

Chris

wow good job. real good ;] keep writing.

I know what you mean. I used to feel so out of place and ashamed of myself when i saw everyone around me so happy. Probably why i love this site, and the people on it, as much as i do. Brilliant poem as always :)
Much love,
-A

omg thats deep, it has got a lot of meaning, great poem! i love it, maybe one of my favotires.

PLP ~lil slam~

i may not know what you feel,
but let me least let you know,
i will try to help you heal within your cold home,
i will try to help you grow, so your true beauty really shows.

i don't know it's just something i thought of, take care always!

Not at all odd....its a wonderful poem Kalah, keep em coming! -5

Love Heather

i love it kalah! very deep and strong poem. amazingly written. and at times i wish the same thing too, that people could feel the pain and know what its like. i love you!!

Wow. this poem is truly amazing. I like it very much. A job well done. it captures the feeling beautifully!
-K

I connect with this poem on so many levels, it is like an exact expression of my feelings. I can completely understand it; it's depth is what so many people miss and it's a shame!

i totally agree with this poem......its very deep and filled with emotion, keep it up =) ~hugs~

-brittnay- ((5/5))