You make it all better And i want to do the same

by Brian King   Aug 15, 2003


It's Always Friendlier With Two
I Just Wish You Were "There" When I Needed You

Whenever I'm Wearing A Frown
I Look At You And It Turns Upside Down

Whenever You Feel Low
Please Don't Worry I Love You So

Whenever Your Down And Feeling Like Poo
I Will Always Be There Caring For You

Just Give Me A Call And I'll Be There
Cause You Are A Great Person For Whom I Truly Care

Whenever I'm Down with a Feeling for dope
I Just Think Of You Because You Give Me Hope

You're The Best In This Town
Life's So Much Better When Your Around

The World Is So Ugly
But Your So Beautiful To Me

So Now I Pray For you Every Night
Because It's You Who Makes My Life So Bright

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  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    well, here or there, either was fine until you said it was past tense... then, of course "there" is correct, but then you need to change other words.... "I wish you had been there when I needed you" that makes it past tense.

    You really have a lot of talent, this was a great poem with a lot of good thoughts... you just need to work on your grammar, and that will come with time...

  • 19 years ago

    by Brian King

    ok Danielle i meant There as in "there" to help as a helping friend caring person etc.

    plus it's the past tense

  • 19 years ago

    by beaver

    really liked this one. A good use of words!

  • 19 years ago

    by Danielle

    Just my opinion but in the second line when u said that u wanted her "there" wouldn't u want her "here" with u? it was a cute poem regardless

  • 19 years ago

    by Jackie Bilson

    That poem was so cute...

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