Beautifully written...Holly

loved it!
u going on my favourites.

i especially like it when you said
'your carelessness was a knife that dug into my heart'

keep writing like this!
abbi x

beautiful writing, i simply love it!!

I love the rain...but, yeah, beautiful poem :)

xxx

a great poem. i enjoyed reading it. keep writing. xxx

That was really really well written 5/5 I loved ALL of your choice of words keep it up

Natty

What a great way to end the poem. That was awsome keep up the lovely work... you are a truly gifted writer.. so i hope you don't cease to write becuase it would be a huge lose of talent! Anyways great job cannot wait to read more. 5/5 overall