A really good poem pleasure to read!

take care

ooh, i like this....i was just sitting here in this stupid boring class imagining this exciting and moving moment. amazing write!

OoOO I agree with Andrea! Very touching...!! Amazing write hunni bunni, lol!!!

Great poem really nicely written hey since your so good check out mine and see what im doing wrong

I liked how you described everything. This ones very good. Keep up the good work and stay strong! :)

Aw I love this!! Its really good, and very descriptive. Well done! And thanks for commenting on my poem. Check out some of my other stuff when you get the chance. Thanks take care x

Very deep...it had a very natural flow. The last stanza really brought the entire piece together! Well done~Holly

"child, smiled" this way of rhyming shows your creativity. You need to make "bloodred" a hyphenated word as blood-red. Nevertheless the poem is outstanding.