Good f'ing Lord!! You want MY rate and comment??!?!?! Look at how many people you've already got! lol. You seem fully equipped, but I'll comment anyways.

The poem definitely had a nice message to it. The flow was incredible and after this poem, quite frankly I have to add you to my favorites. That was truly, TRULY inspirational!

~Sierra

Wonderful job, best poem i've heard in the longest time!

I really like your poem. I think that it is always a hard thing to express to others who you are. And many times you are only able to do so in a journal. Writing it down is the first step...and when you are ready hopefully you'll be able to voice aloud who you are.

Exellent job on this poem! It had a great meaning and I can relate I am who I am! Very well done. Thanxs for ur comments on mine and keep up the good writes! Take Care Brooke

Thats awesome. I really like it. You found out wat u were about and i like that.

amazing :) u should be proud
Sammi and Brelta

omg i love this poem. it's something that lots of ppl can relate to, including me. it's true, by the way, thanks 4 commenting!

Whoa. That was cool. I love your beginning.

Omg, thank you everyone! I really Appreciate it. Thank you for all your comments and your ratings. I would appreciate it if you rate more. Thank you, I'e never gotten so many comments before : )!!!!!

this is amazing i really liked it well done!!! xx

Bravo Bravo!! That was excellent!! I really liked you style in this peice so much! But what I most liked is your attitude towards life! Trust me you never want that feeling to go! I think you wrote down your feelings very nice and you had great rhythm and flow to this poem! Keep up the fantastic work! 5/5
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~

very good poem.

omg wow! that was soo amazing! I think Journals are an amazing thing. Well g2g, you have an amazing skill so don't stop writing! ttyl
lia jnell

Great!!!! thanks for writing a comment for my poem! yours was excellent KEEP IT UP!

Luvly

Aww! its a great poem Fransisco, I love the reflection, it was a great change in the poem...keep it up hun!

God bless you
Love Heather

ps if that journal gets a lil old, i'll listen =)

I really liked it. Keep up the good work.

that was like...crazy good. no. it wasnt good. it was awesome possum! lol. and awesome possum, is better than just awesome. no lie. it is. really, if i had your talent, i would possibly explode. lol. check me out sometime. even though my crap sux! lol. ttyl!!!
-nancy

p.s....can i add you to my faves? cuz your really bueno!! woohoo!! can i? ------nancy

omg this is excellent!!!! i love ur work, especially this one.! great job thanks for the comment!