Caught

by JustAFoolInLove   Mar 31, 2005


Every turn I take
I find is wrong
But all to late
To help the fall.
The hole is deep
And each of them will go
And stand upon the rim.
They gaze into the pit
And long for friendly eyes
I show them these, I do,
But realize my mistake too late

The second that they find me
I am their only hope
So they cling upon me, day and night
And wish
Deep inside
That I felt desolate, too
That I felt as they did
So they could bond
And cling forever
To my heart

But upon the lip
Of the darkest hole
They lean and sway and scream
They wish that I
Could find them there
And, just in time,
I catch them

I grab their hands
And they hold mine
But when I set them down
They stay.
They look into
My eyes and they
Will tell me that they owe me
For all I’ve done,
The things I’ve said
They say the owe their lives
For catching them in mid fall

*This is the worst poem ever written, and if you don't agree with me, then you need help; you need help BADLY!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    "*This is the worst poem ever written, and if you don't agree with me, then you need help; you need help BADLY!"

    Well..gosh. What a surprise!?! I NEED HELP? -gasp-
    ..
    sarcasm?
    yes.
    You say that about most of your poems, but you're still the amazing writer you are because even when you're not rhyming the words are your own, coming from YOUR heart, and your heart is the purest most beautiful thing I've ever had the fortune to see.
    :-)

  • 20 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    Really, it was hot. Would I lie?

  • 20 years ago

    by MYkisstoBETRAY

    Zac, that isn't BAD!!! It's different for u but it's good to try another style of writing!! I swear u should give urself more credit!
    *Jacki*

  • 20 years ago

    by Lost but Smiling

    Zac, we all know i need help, but it's still a good poem silly duck! =P. anyway, yeah, good job. i give it a 5/5...

    ~Rae

  • 20 years ago

    by troubled

    well i guess that i need help badly 2!! lol its a great poem zac...keep it up..5/5!

    btw..im not mad or upset at u..honest!

    *jen-jen*

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