I really liked this poem and i can relate.... It made me feel quite sad becoz i always preach to others bout everyone is beautiful and blah blah but i never actually believe for myself and i see all these faults but anyways i'll shut up now:) Amazing poem though I loved It.
Tash
xoxox
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wow...amazing poem with so much emotion...i like it.

Wow... i get more and more "into" your poems. I love everyone i've read... 5/5

unexpected ending, short and to the point. nice one =)

This poem is really sad..I really hope you feel better about your self. Nice write. >3jess

Filled with emotion and well worded, this poem created a clear image as it prgressed.

Keep Writing
Nici

Very well done! You did an exellent job on this poem! Keep it up! Take Care! Brooke~

Awesome poem. Very beautiful

i think its awesome that you added a picture for your poem. very original. the poem was awesome too. great job

Beautiful! 5/5

wow that was an amazing poem, and beautiful picture too...what scares me is that the bedroom set up is just like mine. lol. overall the poem was soo awesome! xxx

That is very neat, I like how you added the picture, really shows you put all your heart and mind into this poem.

this is sooo sad, but beutiful. wow x

Excellent poem! 5 I totally undertand this poem!!!!

liked the poem, the flow was good the ending was great

I love this poem. It is great! I know exactly how you feel. Keep this up!

Love much,
Tiff

this was a bit harsh and very sad. well done though
~Freak~

loved it. Keep up the great work. the rhyme is excellent. love, Marjan

loved it. Keep up the great work. the rhyme is excellent. love, Marjan

i bet the girl was pretty in the beginning as she was in the end loved this poem