Who knew

by Lmay   Mar 31, 2005


With shut eyes i go out the door,
My heart is open, bleeding and raw.
After so many frightful years, I've left you.
I would be smiling, but I've forgotten how to.

Fortnight later a rose does fall
Into the pit that ends it all,
Face made up with layers of paint
Everyone says how the marks are faint,
It's a shame, she's so young they repeat,
As another blooming rose falls to their feet,
we thought they were happy, it makes no sense,
That here lays a victim of domestic violence.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Robiie

    Hey great poem, It has a lot of heart

    x0x0 robyn

  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    very sad......but very beautiful as well, great write, keep it up =) ~much love~

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    Great poem, your message was put across so well!
    xxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Wonderful poem my friend! It flowed well and you ended the poem very nice! It was a pleasure to read..5/5
    Kind Regards,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristen

    Beautiful

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