Comments : Dances with angels

  • 18 years ago

    by Leah20

    I liked this. If this was only one of your firsts, I can't wait to see what else you write! keep in touch, tell me when you write some more, I would love to read them!

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    That was a beautiful poem! Very well done I hope u will continue to post! If u want take a look at mine! Thanx and Take Care! 5/5 Brooke

  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    This is realy good would like to see more.

  • 18 years ago

    by sadnessinshadows

    thanks everyone!

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Wow this is really beautiful xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Pieman16

    Wooo rok on! i liked it :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Wow!!! this is an amazing poem. Your very talented. I love this poem alot. I'm really speachless though but you did an amazing job keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Another good poem. i enjoy reading your work, you really need to post more poems on here

  • 18 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    So sad. So good. Awesome, keep up the good work. Write more!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    Wow i love it it is so great an anwesome

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    You have a lot of tallent I am impressed awesome poem

  • 18 years ago

    by SweetSuicide

    Awesome poem..keep posting i love the two poems you got..

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Pretty damn good to be one of your firsts. I love it! It shows no fear of dying and being in heaven...something you shouldn't fear. Very nicely done!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    This is excellent for one of your firsts! its better than my newest ones lmao! I loved the discribtive imagery. the flow was great! well done xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Beebee

    Awwww...cute

  • 18 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    This was a pretty solid piece,.. no parts straying from the point of the poem..

    they dance and frolic while flapping tattered wings
    all of them on notes a song do sing

    i imagine dancing and frollocking to be on the fround, and the language implies they're in the air.. its hard to think of them dancing in the air for me, but that might be to my fault..

    all of them on notes a song do sing

    this seems to imply that they dance to the songs, but in a unusual way... maybe change that so its more fluent and understandable.. i like the conclusion to this piece.. the part about not falling,.. ties in well with the angels holding you up.. quite nice imagery.. keep writin.. pZ out

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Very different poem from the ones i've read in this site... keep it up ! 5/5 : )

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    I loved the poem! It was awesome and inspirational!