Adorable poem! Love the 4th stanza <3 keep it up!

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The Heart That Touches Yours,
Heather Michelle Craig
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Well done :) very good poem really sweet well done

loving poem with a slight twist ending (anger! lol) I like the very last line... but love can be freeing lol -5 keep on writing!!
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Good poem, I kinda know what you are talking about i think, lol. Check out some of my stuff if yo uhave time

I really loved it! Could really tell the feeling in it! :)

god, that was beautiful! you are a great poet, and i love this poem. it's so descriptive and so sweet 5/5

That was really good... keep it up babe I am sure that any girl would be pleased to recieve this.

--Sher

It was good, but confusing.........

'confusing' ? i'll try to use simple english next time. :P

awww really sweet poem really enjoyed the line...Yet toxic to the heart....hope ur well and if u have the time please check out my latest poem 'Freebird' thanks
take care
xxxLoUxxx

hi i loved your poem is great
look thanks for commenting on my poem it helped alot i really was going to do it the "sui""cide" i was just in the verge of emotion and not shure what to do so i asked for help no bribe
i followed your adbice tho thanks...

It was a trip, I loved how you described her.5/5

Awwwwwww! This was so beatiful and sweet! Whoever the lady is she must be pretty lucky to have you! Keep up the great work and thanx for the comment on my poem!
Take care.....
Haily
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beautifully written xxx

Great poem, i really loved how you described her and also the ending i really liked it! Keep writing and take care....

Wow. I loved this poem, ive got the rhyming bug too :) this girl must have been really lucky 2 have u and if shes let you go...shes a fool. I really liked it :)
Love
~*~KiM~*~
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kim ''really lucky 2 have u''

the poem is in the catogary of 'desired love' ..hope that expalins somthing

"Always clouded my mind a while "
always and awhile contradict each other...maybe you should change it?
Other than that, great poem....love poem are hard to pull off, but you did a fine job.

christa//no motiv?

point take christa. thanks for ur comments keep thme coming.

wow I love this poem.. I voted a 5 =) keep pu the awsome work!! take care