She who does not belong.

by Krystin   Apr 3, 2005


Inside her head
are thoughts unknown
clueless to the public
she will not be cloned

she is a problem child
disturbed; hardly sane
she has lost everything
she has nothing to gain

all her days collide
1 less perfect then the next
her dreams will not come true
she has never been the best

she looks in the mirror
only to find it has cracked
she moves forward
only to, again, fall back

she wakes up each morning
only to go to sleep at night
she stands up to fall down
she cant do anything right

she is a failure and she knows it.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Joann

    thats deep...i loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by angelposer

    Hey Krystin! That was a good poem!!! I liked the part that said"she wakes up each morning
    only to go to sleep at night
    she stands up to fall down
    she cant do anything right
    she is a failure and she knows it." These days the only thing I look forward to when I wake up in the mornings is to go to sleep again that night. So this poem was definitely one I could relate to. Please read some of my poems and comment!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Confused Angel

    awww...that was so sad yet very well written. You are not a failure if that is who you were writing about. keep writing take care

  • 18 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    awwwwwwwwww that was sad~!!!!~ i feel that way some times. but then i remember all the happy times i share with my friends and i feel better. so hang on if u really feel that way~!!!~
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    Wow, that was really sad. You're not a failure, actually, I have a feeling that you are going to turn out to be a very talented person. I know how you feel... no one sees how you feel inside except for you. Hang in there, great work...
    Car