by Ashli Apr 4, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
|
I see you with her, my heart breaks |
|
Wow, awsome poem. I loved it. |
by Kayla
|
wow that was very good...very touching..lol..anyways great poem...5/5 and thanks for commenting on my poems...luv yasmwah |
by Mandy Lou
|
I really like this! It's a great poem and probably a gorgeous song...Wish I could hear it! Keep it up, you're really talented! |
|
what i love about all of your poems is the simplicity and realistic qualities that they all share. they are all simple, but sweet. definitley one of my favorite poets. 5/5 |
by =)~ BJ ~(=
|
i really like this. said it was a song, i read it again kinda like a song. thats how good i thought it was. keep it up |