wow, that was great. it rymed well and it was good. thanks for commenting on my poem, Before I Had a Friend. thanks for being honest. 5/5

The imagery of not seeing beauty because you are looking at the person behind you is emotive and sensual - loved this one xx

I liked this poem because i could relate to the first part and the words were very captivating however the poem started off exceptionally well and near the end the rythming wasn't as good and the flow was more choppy....Rythming is not everything but when you start off rythming you should try carry it through the whole poem.

This poem is just great.
I honestly like it alot..
It's a good read..You're a talented young writer my friend...keep on writing.
All the best to you!..
;-)

thats more like it!
that was awsome!!!
such a sweet poem with such a great feel, such great words, so well written! i love this poem! your a talented writter keep it up!
>>5/5<<
bec

im feeling that whole poem..i know just where you coming from..its beautiful i lovee it *

veru good!

good poem. i liked it alot

nice job! i like your word choice in this one! keep it up!

Very beautiful I love it....but you should try to make the lines more even...Just my opinion, you and many people might disagree =0) lol...but very good...

Thispoem, was, not the best i've read, not sure what this poem is about, maybe a person trying to find who they are? ? ? well keep writing,

This has to be one of my favorite love poems. It is subtle, but so very beautiful. Like your on cloud 9 and there is no turning back. I loved it. Keep this up.

Niceee. i love this: Time is such a burden - There's never enough
Seems time flies when you're flying - There aren't any clocks above
In the sky