by ..::Angel of your darkness::.. Apr 5, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
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I am a red flame |
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Wow i love this one its amazing how you thought of that!! gud job^_^ |
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I don't see how the same thing over and over is powerful but maybe they see something I don't. I can't stand rhyming poems either, so in that, I'm opinionated. The breathing is a little off, I found myself short of breath some lines and breathing easy in others, it threw the poems beat off. |
by Boy
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Wow excelent. Truth. I loved your poem. |
by HeyItsMe
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Great Poem. I love it. |
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Great poem. Nice rhyming, wonderfully chosen title, great repititon... 5/5. |