Once loved

by rachel harris   Apr 6, 2005


I have once loved you, but that love has now gone away. Sometimes when I lay, i like to think of the memories that once involved you, My impressions are silent, how did I ever love you,I must stay independent, lust shall I speak my own words, In deeply love, the wind howls abouts my feet, as I stand with a knife up to my neck, thinking theres no way to hide, hide from myself, hide from you, I must free myself, and let my blood run through you, I once loved you, but that love has now gone away.

~Rachel Harris~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Airika

    I Like it...it could have ended just alittle bit smoother..but i still like it...=]

  • 18 years ago

    by MiMi

    Good job i love it

  • 18 years ago

    by SavannahSurrender

    i love it! 5/5 u need to write some stuff! lol

    much love
    savannah

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Nice, be descriptive.
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

    p/s

    thanks for commenting and voting on my poem