My Life

by Tinkerbelle   Apr 7, 2005


Sometimes my life sucks.
Other times it doesn't.
My parents tell me
it doesn't suck.
But it does.
Sometimes I feel left out.
Like my friends dumped me.
I feel so worn out,
I don't see
what's right in front of me.
My family helps me through out
all of this.
I have so many problems,
I don't know what
to make of all this.
I know someone helps
me through that,
But it still hurts.

*please comment on this poem and tell me if you think it sounds cheesy*

*I'll contact you if you comment on this poem,if I can.*

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  • 18 years ago

    by girlii797

    i don't even remember commenting on this...lol. It is very good. Stay strong, i know you said this isn't true, but it is true in everyone's life to a point.

  • 19 years ago

    by Tinkerbelle

    Thanxs for commenting.and no,it's not true.It just came to me and i wrote it.
    Thanxs for commenting and I'll try to read one of yours and comment on it.
    Tesa

  • 19 years ago

    by girlii797

    nice. Not cheesy. True? is in my life.