So Deceived

by Fierce   Apr 9, 2005


The feeling take over
Without my control
I want to be his love
But my feelings untold

Passing each day
Glancing at him
I think of a way
That I can win

He smiles at me
So deceived
I want him to see
My heart is so heaved

He says we are friends
He doesnt know
That if he opens the door
It can be more

Love is so patient
So I will wait
For true love to come knocking
Wanting a date

He doesnt know
Im not sure he ever will
How much I sow
Into my heart being filled

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Nicely written. Wonderful as always:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Erika Lamorie

    OMG!! I love that poem.. I can totally relate to every word you said

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Nice write -
    I can say i've felt the same - But as they say, the best things in life take time.

    Well done; and cheers for the comments.

    ;;Kalah.

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Nicki*~

    I so feel like this for my best guy friend. I dont think he likes me like that but i know he likes other things he gets

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wonderful poem...you displayed your emotions well...great poem!

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