Hidden Message

by creasy   Apr 10, 2005


Read the intro to this(Intro: Hidden Message) if you’d like. Please comment and vote..thanks!!

I have to tell you something,
please don’t break my heart;
Babe, I’ve always loved you,
I’ve had feelings from the start.

“Love” is what it is,
and I hope you feel the same;
Cause every time I try not to think of you,
my heart ends up saying your name.

You are the only person I think of,
the one that can make me smile;
The one that I belong with,
even though it won’t be for a while.

Papi, just look into my eyes,
realize how much you mean to me;
I really hope you read this,
so my true feelings you will see.

*~*DEDICATED TO YOU*~*

**read the first word, in the first sentence of each stanza, and reveal my ‘Hidden Message’.**

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  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    actually i just changed it so that people won't get confused. now it says "papi" (not meaning dad) cuz i call him that.

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    thanks Heather for your observation, but i did mean in the first FOUR stanzas. see its not his name, but it is what i call him. thanks for the comment and thanks for reading! :) take care.

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Creasy,
    I think you meant read the first word in the first 3 stanzas , otherwise, it reads I love you hey...., but I know what you mean and thats very cute!!
    Nice job! 5/5

    With Love & Respect,
    Heather Michelle Craig
    ~* Shaun's 4 ever *~

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