Very wonderful write and very good useage of your words. I find them rather Intuative. They are very nicely choosen and this is one of the better poems i have seen done in the last little while.

Five/Five

Signed,
Dark Savior

P.S. thanks for your continuing support on my poems, i appreciate it. Really i do.

aww i loved that sooo much!!! a 5/5!!!

omg great poem well done oxoxoox stephy :)

wow brilliant poem! i love the idea of ur subconcious voice! its amazing!!!

xsarax

hmmz i like it is is pretty good take a five keep up da work and writing

Very good poem its creative

take care

very good! 5/5

that was great....really just...wow.....keep it up...you obviously have so much talent...take care of yourself ~much love~ ~more hugs~

-brittnay- ((5/5))

Yay, you got a top rated poem!! Amazing .... I love it.
Take care,
Shell xxx

heyz!!! kool poem i really enjoyed it ..keep it up yay! XOXox sTephy :)

wow , wiked poem dude

u rok

keep on writing

luv sarah xxxxxxx

A good effort - just try to learn to change the voice in your head - it will happen and you'll eventually start to feel better. I hope you find happiness treasure xx

very original, couldnt have written it better myself!
wonderfully done!!
5/5
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cate

hey amazin poem def 5/5 ur very talented keep writin xxxx

WOW! what a great poem, I love the patterm and the lexical choices are fantastic

wow that poem is really cool.... but i got some questions.... what does this voice tell you to do... is it a good voice or a bad voice? i like the poem though great job

In this poem it's a good voice because it tells you the truth, It's that voice that everyone has that will tell them to be strong or just the truth e.g he doesn't love you etc it's more like intuition and i suppose thinking bout it, it can be good or bad but it's the voice you choose to ignore....Hope that makes sense:)

Great job, specially the end! I gave it 5/5

It's a huge job to try an fight one's inner demons. The poem reminds me of two voices (right and wrong), the devil and the angel, both struggling inside. We all have inner voice, but it is so had to always choose and listen to reasoning. Great job, loved it!

Warmest regards,

Steve