by shannon
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awww.. i love this poem. i gave you a 5/5 |
by Amit
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Excellent write, very well done. |
by AntiSocial16
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this is so short but has such a powerful meaning! i think anything less than a 5/5 would be an insult to the poem and your talent! keep up the great work! and stay safe strong and healthy! |
by Angie
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Good job, it was short but to the point, loved it 5/5 |
by deedee
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it is short but it means alot in a little bit of words keep it up |
by Dorotea©
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Yes, I agree with all the other ppl the meaning of this poem is very strong but it's also very original. Wow, I liked it. Keep on writing, 5/5 for this poem! |
by David Paul
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Its a good poem but it sounds like its kind of forced. Like you were trying to make yourself write. If thats what you want than go ahead and keep on but your others are better than this. Keep it real. |
by Gemmie Lou
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well done xx |
by Amanda
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I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :) |
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Hey usually i'd say make it longer but i loved this one it was amazing.... It reminds me of how i'm feeling right now. Short and beautiful, don't change it:) 5/5 |
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its good i didn't give it a five tho cuz it was kinda short but w.e keep up the good writting^_^ |
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short and sweet well written but to me well um add on to it make it more then a 6 line poem it could be really excellent if you add more of that spark this short poem has. its great but add more (my opinion) |
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Short, sweet, and to the point! Very sweet but also very powerful in just a few lines! Keep up the good work! |
by hussain
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short poem that means a lot. Just a few words that have so much meaning to them.Somthing am sure amny can relate to. enjoyed this one Love it. Take care. |
by No Motiv?
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good poem....very short, but sweet, and to the point =) |
by VampyraKiâ€
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A little short but you got the point across i think. nice job keep it up |
by SatinRisse
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Oh how true!! |
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Wow, so short, but i came close to tears. Its amazing how that can happen. Absolutely beautiful! Great job. |
by metuka
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So true! So short but with meaning! |
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Simplistic but effective xx |