My Friend

by Person   Apr 11, 2005


My friend, I miss you dearly,
Life for me was laid out clearly,
But now my future is bleak,
Waiting for your response is taking a week,

Life was fun with you around,
But now i hear no sound,
I'm slowly fading,
Just for you,waiting,

My faith is leaving,
as is your breathing,
How I hate him and his gun,
We were meant to live, and have fun,

I'm scared of losing you,
I know you are scared too,
I now know my own fear,
I fear not seeing clear.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    I liked this poem, the only thing is in this part:

    My faith is leaving,
    as is your breathing,
    How I hate him and his gun,
    It wasn't meant to end up like this,

    the last part doesn't rhyme and it threw off the flow of your poem. Other than that it was an excellent write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ryan

    This is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo awesome

  • 18 years ago

    by kayla

    Man I'm so sorry to hear that! I hope everything is good with you:) If you ever need someone to talk to my e-mail addy is metalchickoz17@yahoo.com ur prolly like freak lol but with everything else aside that really was an awsome poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jay27

    Very deep indeed. If this is your first poem, its a great start.

    Thanks for sharing it.

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