hey thats reely gud

i tink you could have used amore sophisticated word then "silly" on line four to make it sound more powerful... But it's no hardship an di thought your poem was really god! keep writing
kt xx

Sad...I really liked it

Sad...I really liked it

Hey i enjoyed this alot more.. i just thought your poem was generally too sophisticated to have the word silly in it.. it's Tait by the way!
Nice improvement!!
kt xx

nice poem, plz check out some of mine

if this is true never let a guy drive u 2 ur death, my guy just told me he is scared thats why he acts like an ass, but nice 1!!

This was very sad...and well done....but sorry for me it was jsut another cutting poem and wasnt very outstanding or special for me...4/5 your a great writer though...so keep up the good work

That is really good,
i didnt expect it to have a story at the start but then it just seemed to fit so well, i really liked it, the flow was exquisite and well it was just a wonderful piece