Perfect??

by ElizabethE   Apr 12, 2005


Everyone thought she was perfect,
but they couldn't see inside.
She hated herself.
Aall she wanted to do was die.

She'd been hurt before,
too many times.
By different people,
and all their lies.

She couldn't take the pain,
and she held back her tears.
She tried to be strong,
by not showing her fears.

She just couldnt take it,
so one day she stayed home,
and locked all the doors,
and sat there alone.

She was 16,
when she took her life,
She used her only true friend,
the sweet sharp knife.

Please rate and comment, it would mean a lot to me

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  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Another good poem.. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ElizabethE

    "I've heard that poem b4...it's really sad/good. 5/5!"

    where, cause i wrote that?

  • 19 years ago

    by ElizabethE

    it was just something i wrote

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