The way you treat me

by nanz   Apr 16, 2005


You're permanently on my mind
I can't escape you anymore
I'll never be able to forget you
You'll always make my heart sore

I'll always feel this way about you
With the way you treat me
tainting my innocent love
That you don’t notice, can’t see

You can act like I'm nothing
Then adore and love me again
And I'll forgive you each time
Even though I'm in such pain

You know that you're using me
And you know you have power
To control me and abuse me
Til I’m broken, hurt and sour

You know what you can do
Whatever you please
Because I’ll keep coming back
Begging on my knees

For you to do it more
Treat me how I know you will
Make me smile then put me down
Do it more and more and more until

Because of who I've become
Broken in everything I do
I disintergrate down to nothing
Coz I'm so into you

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  • 18 years ago

    by miracle

    hi thnx for you comment too, i don't know what to do
    Right now i haven't seen him for 2,5 weeks because he's on holiday to marokko (where he's from) to family he hadn't seen for 5 years
    but 2 days ago he told me a surprise that he would come back faster a week for me So i don't now sometimes i love him so much but when i with him he keeps hurting me.. :( Well i'm not gonna bother you any farther i will read your other poems too great job 5/5 xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by miracle

    woow! this one is sooo good, i can regconise myself in it! i really love this:

    You can act like I'm nothing
    Then adore and love me again
    And I'll forgive you each time
    Even though I'm in such pain

    It's how i feel wright now, and i think he doens't even knows
    but anyway great job! 5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by lovely__

    lovely ...as usual

  • 19 years ago

    by Rocky

    nicely done i thought i gave it a 5/5

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