Day at pt. lonsdale

by nanz   Jun 15, 2005


Day at Pt. Lonsdale
(With the girls)

Sun comes up on
Three young girls
Who wake at ten
(Slept in their bikinis)
Eat some pancakes
Head to Ocean Grove
Carrying their boards
Slop on the sunscreen
Or tanning cream
Surf then surf then surf
Wander down to
The chip shop then
(Run screaming back)
Down to the beach
Lie in the sun eating
Get (half) dressed again
Walk to the video store
Try to pull off eighteen
Video chick falls for it
Scans the videos
Laugh and walk home
Collapse on the couches
Eat home made dinner
Feel sick but hungry
Opt for brandy
Attempting poker
Go for a night walk
Visit a friend nearby
Four girls, hot spa
Too hot too hot too hot
Sneak off for swim
Freezing beach at night
Three screeching girls
Dry off and get warm
Back home and safe
Watch R rated movie
Drift off one by one
Asleep by three
(Slept in their bikinis)

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  • 18 years ago

    by nanz

    this style of poetry is quite wierd and its something i am experimenting with.....comment please would help heaps, good or bad :D
    thatnks xoxosiena