Irvine...

by Knoxy   Apr 16, 2005


You have made my whole life complete,
I dont know what Id do without you,
You have made,
All of my dreams come true...

I can talk to you about anything,
And you always find some way to understand,
Whenever I need help,
I know youll lend a hand...

I love the way you,
Kiss my neck,
I love the way you,
Did a back ground check...

I love the way you,
Look at me,
And show me,
All that I can be...

I love the way you,
Treat me,
I don't even know,
What it is in me that you see...

I love the way you,
Hold me in your arms,
I love the way you,
Cheer me up with your charms...

All of this,
Feels way too good to be true,
Sometimes i think,
That I don't even deserve you...

I can't erase,
Anything Ive done in my past,
But i just hope,
That you and i last...

(C) Copyright Alana Knox 2005

*This one goes out to my now ex b/f...!!*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was a really cute and sweet poem with strong emotions flowing throughout it. I enjoyed it alot and it kept me interested throughout the whole thing. Well done on a nicely written love poem~mel

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I wanted to come read some poems and say welcome to the crazy club! :)

    This poem is so sweet my dear!! But what the hell happened? This was so awesome and then I read "EX" :) Sorry to hear that!

    It was well written but I would say that all the commas and periods aren't really necessary.

    Nicely done! Hope you're ok! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey thanx Jessi, this meanz alot to me, i really appreciate it, take care and keep on writing..
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 18 years ago

    by Sing me another sad song

    great job on the poem, loved it!! keep all the work up! ^_^
    LoVe jessI

  • 18 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey thanx Linz!! This meanz so much to me, i can comment anytime, i loved to read ur work...keep on writing and take care!!
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

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