Great work huni :) He seems sooo amazing :) Im glad he makes you happy!
xo love ya,
no more

Ahh bless thats so sweet!! I love your stuff, they're really good. Keep it up. x

Hey thanx emma...keep on writing and take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

aw knoxy that's awesome!!! You should deff read it to him, he'll love it!!! awesome poem! love ya!!
-K

Hey thanx hun...this meanz lotz to me :)..i want to...and hopefully i dont chicken out lol..anywayz cya laterz luv you lotz and lotz xoxxo
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Hey thanx No one important and deaths tragedy..this meanz so much to me, im glad that you guyz like it..hehe, i wont let him slip thru my fingerz hun...thanx...and hehe he sure is an awesome guy!! anywayz cya laterz, xoxo
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Hey thanx babygirl...i surely wont let him get away...hez a keeper :P...take care and keep on writing...
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Good job..I loved it.Jeff

Hey thanx, this meanz a lot to me, keep on writing and take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

awww, this is so beautiful! your writing is so lovely and i adore this poem. wonderful write!! 5/5

love always...*hugs*

aww!! thanx Andrea...this meanz so much to me...and ya...i luv this one too haha...take care, and keep on writing!!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Hey thanx kassandra!! hehe...itz one of my fav partz too hehe...i appreciate this soo much..take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Hey thanx again Dora!! ...i havent really gave it to him yet...and we're broken up...but still friendz, not sure if i should give it to him or not lolz..take care luv ya
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Hey thanx Bleeding Red Fallen Angel! this meanz so much to me, i really appreciate you returning the favor...hehe, alrighty! i'll be checkin out more of ur stuff too :P take care and keep on writing!!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Hey thanx Linz!! This meanz so much to me, i can comment anytime, i loved to read ur work...keep on writing and take care!!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

great job on the poem, loved it!! keep all the work up! ^_^
LoVe jessI

Hey thanx Jessi, this meanz alot to me, i really appreciate it, take care and keep on writing..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

I wanted to come read some poems and say welcome to the crazy club! :)

This poem is so sweet my dear!! But what the hell happened? This was so awesome and then I read "EX" :) Sorry to hear that!

It was well written but I would say that all the commas and periods aren't really necessary.

Nicely done! Hope you're ok! :)

This was a really cute and sweet poem with strong emotions flowing throughout it. I enjoyed it alot and it kept me interested throughout the whole thing. Well done on a nicely written love poem~mel