nice poem just it was hard rhythym to follow so yeah pretty good still

Nice poem

It was a great poem about speed! I love the uniqueness in this poem! well done! :)

Hm.
I liked it, but not nessisarly the topic. However, it was very well written, as you seem to have a knack for. Nicely done.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

Excellent i liked this one much more than the nature one, it had such great imagry very good

It was cool. I can imagine this being turned into a heavy metal song. lol. Good job 5/5

Such imagery! You are an awesome poet! A lot of poems will bore me, but your poems capture my attention all the way through.. from start to stop. lol.. Fantabulous! 5/5

This poem holds greatly described excitement, it held my attention from the first line. Very original piece, very descriptive and powerful.
You expressed all emotions and thoughts here excellently.

This one had amazing imagrary! wow! the rhyming again seem forced and i didn't like the structure of it.. maybe pick a different title? but overall very good poem!!! :o]

Oh how I love the imagery in this...simply breathtaking.

I found this to be very well written, and a delightful read.

The flow is near perfect throughout the piece, coupled with the content and wording, everything comes together to create a truly beautiful read.

Great, i thought this was going to be a 'luvin dis laa' type lol but it was really well structured. xxx alex xxx