Very well written. I like how it ends, too. You can really tell what you are feeling :) Excellent. Well, I have to go, but I will be back to read your poems later. Tata

Eden

Awesome write Nick! It rocked out loud! Keep writing, and thanxs for all the comments on my poems! I enjoy reading them!
With much love and a hug,
Krista J.

wow, i really liked the end, but all together it was a very good poem. great job.
-Kit

That was awesome!! Ofcourse I will pray for you!! Im sorry your going through a difficult time! I hope things get better for you!! I really hope you take care of yourself, and make wise decisions!!
xxx
Sierra

Very emotional poem its great thanks so much for the comment!

take care

your not meaning less flame your amazing your great i love you your a great guy
i loved your poems it really good
take care cool girl!!

Great Job!! it was deep, shows great emotion!!! Keep it up, you are very talented.

~CD AkA girlii797