great poem, wonderful imagery. i dont know what else to say. very well written and such.

Oh those crushes! I love your work! You write what's real. Another good one as always! I always look forward to your new poems! Take Care! Brooke

wow, wonderful poem. I love the meaning behind the words. 5/5.

Awesome poem, it was simple but the meaning behind it was powerful. I don't have time to read your other new poems right now, but i'll get around to it. Keep writing,
Satuxxa

describes how beauty not shared is futile good job

if only i could give this to my doll on teh shelf.. a friend of mine and me have this..

thats great
He may smile but its not inviting
The look in his eyes tells you so
He may say hello

ilike this part
keep it up

lotta love~*MIKE*~

Very creative and original. Beautiful imagery.... and I can relate it to some others. 5/5

<3 Heather M Craig

POWERFUL WRITE 5/5 CLO X

Very intriguing...loved the mystery~Holly

hey good poem well done mate

Great poem. You have a wonderful imagination.
Take care and God bless you!

brilliant! very well expressed well i g2g i'll comment on the rest of your poems l8r. Peace! //ari\\