this is a fine piece of poetry i like your style 5+

For someone so young that is a powerful poem honey. Keep it up xx

hi, good job! 5/5!!!
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Very well done, wonderful expression and scheme.

Wow, I love this poem. Very unique. I like it. Excellent job. <3333

Oh my god! That was so amazing. I am speechless beyond words. This must be your best...if it isnt then you are extremely talented.