Today Will Be Mine

by CritiX   Apr 19, 2005


Take my hand and walk with me
Across blue shores and beyond disbelieve

Into misty dreams and fallen tears
Walk with me and let go of your fears

As we walk you’ll see your footsteps fade
Let go of your past and step into the future you made

Tomorrow will be the end of your tiresome fight
Let the massive struggle end here tonight

Know you can go from here to heaven in a flash
So lets go tonight and forget about this mess

As I take the knife and draw the final line
Today will be the end
Today will be mine…

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  • 18 years ago

    by CritiX

    Thanks all for at least reading my poems and in some cases thanks for commenting..

    This is and will be my last poem here on Poems-and-Quotes. In a few days from now I will kill myself leaving this pathetic world.. Thanks for those that stood by me.. Cya in another lifetime maybe

  • 18 years ago

    by Kurt

    Really good but i have a couple tips. Use belief instead of believe.. because it is better grammar. And the 5th stanza doesn't seem to fit and kinda kinks up the flow. Still a great poem even with some mistakes. Shows you have real talent.

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