That place will never be

by SSSAAMMMYY   Apr 22, 2005


Close your eyes
If you are wise
Dream of a place where life is still
A palce where you get a thrill
A place where you have no worries
A place where you are calm
A place where you are free
Now open your eyes
And you will see
That that place will never be

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  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    Now this is excellent!I love how you start out with a sweet, happy scenario then at the end hit with such an impact, almost a brutal honesty.Beautifully done, both in construction and in what it says.

  • 18 years ago

    by SSSAAMMMYY

    Nice job