A Final Death

by deadnalone   Apr 22, 2005


I apologize, i don't feel this is a very good poem.

Please, take my scars,
Take them far, Take them far,

Please, take my hurt,
No more dirt, No more dirt,

Please, take my need,
Don't watch it bleed, Don't watch it bleed,

Please, take my mind,
Where no one can find, Where no one can find,

Please, take my tears,
Away with my fears, Away with my fears,

Please, take my final breath,
And with it please give me,
A final death.

*All votes and comments greatly appreciated as always.*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Toni

    Brilliant hun, brilliant brilliant! xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by natalie eslinger

    That would be good for song lyrics!!