Wow well done that was great!

Keep it up

this poem is kind of haunting, but a good kind in that it lingers with you long after you have read it. great job.

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Thank you for the comment... Nicely written, suspenseful and intriguing! keep it up!

Love,
Heather

Aww, your poem has depressed me lol. I know so many people like that. It's really well written and I loved it. I also like that you think of other words instea of the usual ones people use
5/5

Hello Crimsonsoul!

i like your name : P
its fantastic ,i love your way of
decribing that other person "You"
that was really smart and interesting
to read !

Excellent !

Peace
Rua Francis.

Hi again !

i've checked your registration date
and made sure that your new in here,
coz i didnt see you around before,so
am happy to have you here,you will
enjoy this poem network : )

take carez

Rua Francis.

Great poem. Please keep up the writing and don't be too harsh on yourself.

hey thanks 4 ur comment on mine...i realli like this poem of urs its tru as well..i can relate..keep up ur gr8 talent! luv ya take care mwahzz luv shell

we need to talk.

Wonderful. I know exactly how you feel, i feel the same way. It's great. You're a great writer, keep it up sweets. *hugs*

~Jessica

Wow, great poem, very deep and dark. Nicely worded.

I don't know you but thats amazing and keep it up!!

Well crimson poet, I found this poem to be, as it was categorized, dark. As such I have no choice but to commend you on your acheviement. However, I would like to give you one small suggestion: The hatred and sadness rut is deeply effecting on people, yet it cannot grow. I used to be a "self-mutilator"/ depressed child. But I could only think of so many ways to say "I am in pain". I think you have the potential to be great, as soon as you make that message that moves them. Good work overall, 4.

This is an amazing poem. Very emotional!

Hmm mysterious nice work

Another great poem
5/5
~EM