Eternal Darkness***

by NoPatience   Apr 23, 2005


Let me sleep
in eternal darkness
watch me weep
you're oh so heartless

let me sleep
in my dungeon on doom
to bed i leap
into my room

let me sleep
just one last time
last for weeks
and then rewind

let me sleep
in these four walls
hear me weep
your name i call

Let me sleep
in eternal darkness
watch me weep
you're oh so heartless

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  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Simple but so meaningful...I love it...flow is great...

    And thanks for the comment :)

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by NoPatience

    aww lol thx

  • 18 years ago

    by Synyster

    this could be made into a song. ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by NoPatience

    well thanks alot. i feel so special!

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Omg everytime I read something of yours.. I can write a song to it. I love it!! It's awesome! 5/5

    <3 Darien

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