Close to death

by Annie   Apr 23, 2005


So close to death-no return
made me realize I'd burn, without you i couldn't survive
there would be no reason to be alive...
That's why before you go i need to tell you how i feel as i kneel down beside you i start to cry.
You ask whats wrong?, it's just been so long, since I'd seen you last...
And now to see you like this it breaks my heart...
Please just take my hand and tell me you wont leave not just yet give me longer to say my goodbyes!
I know we told each other lies.. but I wonna 4get and 4give move on love each other one last time, I told you this as you were taking your last breath the last things you said were "I've never stopped loving you" as you closed your eyes i really started to cry...i close my eyes too, i hear you gasping for breath and i whisper "i love you too".
I hear the machines go dead i stand up lean over and give you a kiss, a tear drops on your still face with that i leave you remembering how you taste how we loved, how we always wanted to be and how we ended i smile because you got to hear how i felt and it turns out our feelings never did change i just wish we could lived our lives together from the start to the end...
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hey this is my first poem I've put in here i dont think its very good but if you could give me your comments i would really Appreciate it thanx!!!

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