Lost love

by darkness decends   Apr 23, 2005


We were always together, you were my best friend.
We vowed to be together til the very end.
But we made the biggest mistake.
At first I thought it was all fake.

Running away like I was used to all this.
They shot and thankfully they missed.
Looking back I could see you were hit.
All I could think is a hate all this shit.

Back I sprang straight to your side.
You were my friend always, with so much pride.
A shallow stream of blood flows from your face.
I let you get hurt I'm such a disgrace.

We will always be together til were both dead.
If you die I'll blow off my head.
Please I love you don't leave me here alone.
I looked into you eyes and fears is shown.

The twilight I see is still amazing.
Why did they shoot you why were they hating?
You cough once and twice, The time has come, you have to go.
As you go limp, I thank to myself this can't be don't Leave me No don't go NO!!!

tell me what you think please, thank you

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  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good, remember that poems don't have to have complete sentences. Try to reduce the "we" and the "I". Keep it up

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