When

by disquiet thoughts   Apr 23, 2005


When you say you miss me when you say you never lied when you say you'll always be here my heart starts to soar my mind becomes a whirl.
what have you done to my mind?
fed it poison, or perhaps booze?

when you reappear after a long while when i realized you've never really given up when i know you've never really been gone for long my heart aches for you there's nothing i won't do.
what have you done to my heart?
i feel captured, i cannot move.

will you let me go will you take your phony dream and burn it, and spare me from tears?
i know you know that nothing would come out of us, it's a love curse.
will you stop trying to free me will you let my chains remain where they are, around my wrists?
i know you know i'm tired of hanging on i've shown you how i feel, it's too obvious to be missed.

- the run-on lines and structure are deliberate :D -

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  • 19 years ago

    by miaowmolly

    Hey i really related to this poem... it was beautiful. Great work.. If u ever need sum1 to tlk to about anything u can always e mail me at miaowmolly@yahoo.co.uk. Peace and love Mia Xxx