Wow that was brill lol made me want to get my fella over asap lol keep it up lol

I liked this poem. The wording was good. I gave it a 5/5.

Wow
That was so hot
I wish I was that girl ;)
You got me so wet haha

Damn, that was hot! Keep writing! :P

Wow that would be fun right now you were right i an kinda wet lol but great poem i really like it you really should write more

I love this piece. It's really good. The flows really well and I love the ending lol. Well done, 5/5, Em

*exhales* wow

Wooooow couldn't have said those words better myself 5/5

Keep writing .

Damn straight we love it.and yeah my juices are a waterfall right now...damn brings back memories of a sensual night....