That one had me blushing:) Very nice. Cute ending there...and hey, how did you know I that I had forgotten to breath? LOL

Omg.....I'm adding u 2 my fav. ........ Ur really good.... Like all ur foreplays......keep writing.... Love to read more

wow good job hotter then the stuff i write wow and that says alot

gothic sugar

that was a great poem it really flowed together. 5/5

hey gotta a girlfriend? haha .. j/p

i put u on my favorites list, i love reading erotic stuf like dat and i must say u had a very good effect on me, that was a great poem as are all ya ovas, 5/5, chek out mine sumtime lv ambz xxxx

this is a VERY hott n sexy poem!!lol...it def. did it for me....cant wait to read part 2 and 3.....
~*~yasmin~*~

Very hot....loved the ending, lol! Look forward to more~Holly

yo ima give it 2 u , u did get me to that point, ur good, or maybe it's my mind i mean look at my name SEDUCTIVE. OH N I READ ALL 3 PRTS IVE BEEN WET THROUGH IT ALL !!

WOAH HOLY SHIT GREAT POEM I LOVED IT..IT DID IT FOR ME THATS FOR SURE...I LOVED IT SOOOO MUCH...KEEP IT UP!

hey matthew, maybe we can do some foreplay of our own..lmao.. nah just playin. nice poem though. keep it up.. you should read my poem "pleasure" think that would make you feel good just thinking of it.. lmao. takce care. :)

Thats hot

Wow you're good

That was great!

xx

Veeery sexy, hot poem. i like the last 2 verses, very clever;) but i have caught my breath and i must say anybody who can read that n not be turned on is a champ! well written, good job, keep it up-..i mean the good poetry lol..p.s thanx for thatt!

Lol woo i loved it. especially,
You ladies love hearing how I tickle the clit;
I bet you get wet just thinking of it.

so true ;)

much love and many kisses,
bex

Dude, this is a great poem!! and it's making me horny/wet and everything. read some of mine sometime. maybe you'll like my master and slave. ^.~

He knew what i was thinking and feeling lol 5/5

Lol. The end of that is so cheeky.

This was an awsome poem. keep up the good work