Wow, That poem is really sad, heart wrenching and I have a heart of stone, I hope everything gets better for you, you are an amzing writer and I love reading your work, keep going and take care of yourself...

katie! xxx

I'm so sorry you have to go through that, you poem was so touching, I'm so sorry, I look forward to reading the next part, even though it may be as sad as this, I hope things get better for you, keep it up xxx

im so sorry your mom treats you like that. you're beautiful and one of the most talented people on this site. don't let her jealous words bring you down.
beautiful, beautiful poem. this is definitely one of my favorites. keep up the amazing work and take care.
Ariane
-xXx-

didnt make senes beautiful but i think you could of wrote it better then that (sorry)

TheRealMan

Wow, this is really really sad. I hope things get better for you. Don't let her words get to you. Keep writing, you're an amazing writer.
Take Care.
Always,
Danielle.

THIS POEM YOU WROTE WAS GREAT. YOUR A GREAT WRITER!

that was great I didn't want to stop reading..awesome job..this is pure greatness

Unloved ♥

WOW!!! That is a great poem.......I'm guessing this is true right? I hate parents that act like that. I've always wondered why they even acted like that in the first place. They are just jealous of what you've turned out to be but they don't want to show it. They want to act better than you and so that's why I think they act like that. I gave this poem a 5!! Can't wait to read the other part!

XoXoX
Sarah

Andrea, Very touching but well written. Take care, hugs, love, *Ann*

Pretty sad. I can't believe your parents are like that. Still it was good.

can't believe your mom would say those things to you! don't listen to it k? because she's wrong. gonna go read the second part now!

So sorry about your parents...ugh! but odd structure, but nicely written!

Love
Heather

Aw, Andrea! I'm so sorry that this is true! It was a great poem! Don't listen to your mother, you're beautiful and you have a ton of talent writing! I wuv you so much and I miss you tremendously! <3

~Krissy

*big bear hug*

Omg thats and incredible poem but so sad. Hope it gets better for ya...

Jemma

*gasp* your mom shall pay when the monkey nuts take over the world. . . i shall let the monkey nuts shove pineapples up her ass. . . hehe. . . sorry! but seriously the supersperm will infect her so much that she shall be known as the w.hore of the monkey nuts hehe well i'm glad you got to go and got to ride in the cool limo and i'm sure you looked pretty hott and i'm sure all the supersperm would want you but you and i are the rulers so that just can't work. . . damn. . . poor sperm lol well keep it up! i love it!

Love, Taylor

awww.. Andrea.. :'( that's so.. sad.

&hearts ya!

this was a good poem ... but its sad (did your mom really say that stuff to you?! )
-Chelsea

Man I'm on the verge of tears... :( Don't let your parents get to you.. Cause' you're a wonderful person... Keep your head up and take care (always) xx:

*> : PainOfOne

it's AWESOME!!! if it's true, then that's messed up-but the words rawk....never change!

wow, your poem is really good I have just started writing poems i have only written 1 so far and i am working on another i hope mine will be as good as urs one day! <3~ Megan