Wow, That poem is really sad, heart wrenching and I have a heart of stone, I hope everything gets better for you, you are an amzing writer and I love reading your work, keep going and take care of yourself...
I'm so sorry you have to go through that, you poem was so touching, I'm so sorry, I look forward to reading the next part, even though it may be as sad as this, I hope things get better for you, keep it up xxx
im so sorry your mom treats you like that. you're beautiful and one of the most talented people on this site. don't let her jealous words bring you down.
beautiful, beautiful poem. this is definitely one of my favorites. keep up the amazing work and take care.
WOW!!! That is a great poem.......I'm guessing this is true right? I hate parents that act like that. I've always wondered why they even acted like that in the first place. They are just jealous of what you've turned out to be but they don't want to show it. They want to act better than you and so that's why I think they act like that. I gave this poem a 5!! Can't wait to read the other part!
Omg thats and incredible poem but so sad. Hope it gets better for ya...
14 years ago
*gasp* your mom shall pay when the monkey nuts take over the world. . . i shall let the monkey nuts shove pineapples up her ass. . . hehe. . . sorry! but seriously the supersperm will infect her so much that she shall be known as the w.hore of the monkey nuts hehe well i'm glad you got to go and got to ride in the cool limo and i'm sure you looked pretty hott and i'm sure all the supersperm would want you but you and i are the rulers so that just can't work. . . damn. . . poor sperm lol well keep it up! i love it!