Part 1, Luv Obstacles

by Seductive   Apr 26, 2005


I have wrote many poems,
But there all similar too one,
From the first time I laid eyes on you,
Our life had just begun,

I went from love at first sight,
Too many arguments at night,
But not one time,
Has our disagreements lead to a fight,

There has not been a moment,
Were he raised his hand,
But plenty of episodes,
When I couldn't stand,

Writing poems is a way for me to express my feelings,
I guess you can call it my way through pain I'm healing,

You tell me you love me,
But what exactly does that mean,
You say you will do things,
When it's time, thats not how it seems,

I want to believe you,
Because I know your love is true,
But you make me think differently,
From the basic things you wont do,

Somehow your truth turns into a lie,
Then at night on my pillow is were I will cry,

Too be continued.............

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  • 18 years ago

    by Erica

    Hey..i love this poem it was really good...thanx for commenting on so many of mine..and yeah you're right i liked a guy that liked one of my best friends so u know how that goes...but im finally over him for real now so it's all well and good but yeah i like your stuff...im adding u to my favs. too 5/5 <3

  • 18 years ago

    by tiffany

    I LOVED IT!5!

  • 18 years ago

    by EEG

    guys are the most confusing beings on earth!! i totaly fell you on this one!

  • 18 years ago

    by lindsey

    i love this i'm bout 2 read the other one.. but yea i do want 2 talk do u got msn aim or yahoo..if u do let me kno...great poem..<3 lindsey

  • 18 years ago

    by MissSideways

    ohh thats so sad. i hope its not true. keep it up!! the more u write the deeper and easier it gets to reveal ur feelings. its the best release, i agree! god bless,
    dani

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