Get That Old Thing Back

by LiL One   Apr 27, 2005


I'm going to bring it back,
to where It all began,
back when I found my first love,
back before he was my man.

It all started years ago,
when we were both young and naive,
not expecting anything from the future,
just taking what we receive.

I instantly knew we were meant to be,
everything about you made me want more.
I loved your straight forward personality,
it was nothing like what I'd seen before.

Once we got together,
we were both alittle older,
and through all these years,
are love for each other grew bolder.

I wanted it to work,
I did everything I could,
I was so in love with you,
It was something no one understood.

Then you started playing games,
you kept lying,
this can't be real love,
if I'm constantly crying.

You had me trapped,
there was no where to go.
I wanted to stay with you,
but it was time for me to grow.

We ended like that,
it was hard for me to deal,
getting over you wasn't an option,
what I had for you was real.

Moving on took time,
sometimes I still dwell on the past
wishing I could get back all those tears I cried,
it seems like everything went so fast.

When you came back into my life,
I tried to get our old thing back,
but time after time,
I realized what I need from a man, is what you lack.

I hated you when you hurt me,
and hate is what I still feel.
I'm tired of compromising,
I want something that is REAL

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    you first started to talk about the first man you loved then you were talking to him plain and simple. Kee it in one status and don't change the other thing is are should be our. You have some good rythming but its abit choppy. Good try though the other poem that had all the cursing in it though I would have to say my opinion stands. As you get older you will see what I mean. Cursing is an easy way out of explaining your emotion almost like a cop out. Thousands of words in the English vocabulary and you use the most used. Me noval and make people learn from what you wright make them ponder on your words. Thats when you become a true artist of words take care and have a good one...

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Wow I could be writing this poem. It's so much like what I have went through! I like the way you write about your true feelings! Take Care! Brooke

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetically Speaking

    What I love about peoms like this is they feel so true. I can actually feel your pain through your words. I think you did a great job on the writting part. On the other end, the actual subject... you will find love again. And it will be real when you both are true with one another. It will come again, don't worry. Keep your chin up lil one. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    Thats pretty good I liked it!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Frankie

    I like the way you told a story, very good!