My friend pain

by Zero Cool   Apr 27, 2005


Hello pain my old firend
I have come to talk to you again
You left your image in my brain
Of the pain that still remains
My hope is on the edge of a Knife
With this knife i take my life
As the blood runs down my wrist
The warm of my pain is pure blist
I wished upon a falling star
but as it fell i counted one more scar

My wish was for you
So we could be two
I stand by the sink
And i am writing my pain
With this red ink
I need a hand to stop this man
to stop the pain that it begain.
Can you try to fix what i have done
For i Hate what i have become.

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  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    HelLo John

    that was Really a good work mate
    i love the Conversational start you had
    talking to Pain as a Friend !! i think
    Pain is many other Friends in this world !!!

    nice work 5/5

    much

  • 19 years ago

    by heather

    WOW all i can say is WOW words cant tell how GREAT that poem was it was just amazing and i really look up to you for your talent..it is just amazing how you can write something like that..it really touched me inside.no joke...probly the best poem i have heard in a very very long time...you r going to go somewhere with this..i can feel it!!!keep writeing cause if you dont that would be a shame...you are REALLY REALLY GOOD!!! i wish i could think of the right words to reach how good this is but there is no words out there to describe it!!!!
    love: heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Rad

    Good poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by tictac

    your poem is REALLY good but know th at i rated yours please rate mine

  • 19 years ago

    by SSBAL

    i told you this b4, but i am rather jealous of your poem writing gift...lol...i want you to finish that other poem john! take your time...
    luv ya
    jo

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