Secretly Me

by Kayla   Apr 29, 2005


The thought of being alone
Made her want to die
She didn't have anyone
She did nothing but cry

She would sit in her room
Music up, door locked
No one would miss her
She isn’t shocked

She keeps to herself
And writes poems everyday
Talking about dieing
And not caring what people say

She doesn't go to games
Or even the school dance
And she doesn’t play sports
And boys don’t have a chance

She cries all night
And screams in her sleep
No one heard her
When she slid the razor to deep

The blood stained the carpet
Still no one could see
This the girl I am telling you about
Secretly is me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    Great job
    i lvoe it
    its greatful awesome
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    The thought of being alone
    Makes me want to die
    If I didn’t have anyone
    I would do nothing but cry

    Should be "The tought of being alone,makes HER want to die, if SHE didnt have anyone, SHE would do nothing but cry"

    Because you changed from me to her then at the end its secretly you..
    And also "And screams in my sleep " should be HER sleep..It would make it all flow better and be easyer to understand :D good poem I liked the end and the flow wasnt bad well done xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Wow...thanks..I just write down the way I feel....and I am happy to know someone likes them.... I'll add you too....if you have msn messenger my email is girard_sweetheart_88@hotmail.com....add me :)

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